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Nov 27. If Otherwise

If Otherwise She could be sorting through my clothes— what to Good Will? what to keep? what to give away? Who was it that admired the blue cashmere? She could be lifting my jewelry gently  from its...

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Re: Nov 27. If Otherwise

Too good to be buried! I love the last two lines, esp. the last line. And the title! Really nice, quiet but deeply felt.

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Wow--those last three lines!

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the needle ticking is really fine. sometimes one phrase is enough to carry a whole poem, or at the very least, to hold its essence until you get back to it. this will be a good one! yes, if otherwise....

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Re: Nov 27. If Otherwise

Yes. What everyone else wrote. The last two lines. Nice.

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